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           <span class="count">4.</span>
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           <h4>Acceleration Engine</h4>
-          <p>Over time, our models will learn what makes for compelling high level 
-						structure and offer assistance on narrative structure, shot composition, 
+          <p>Over time, our models will learn what makes for compelling plot and pacing
+						and will offer assistance on narrative structure, shot composition, 
 						and timeline construction.</p>
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 					Hollywood and traditional media are quadratic in cost, time, and complexity. 
 					The next wave of technology includes fixes for dozens of these inefficiencies, and transforms
-					human labor back into human creativity. As it should be.
+					human labor back into human creativity. Imagine if <em>you</em> could make a film in a weekend.
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